I regret not coming across this earlier, oh my god this is beyond beautiful. I love how this etched my heart the right way. Absolutely love the way you write, momina. Always looking upto you<3
The build up? The imagery? The perfect shayari for each moment? The shift from kabhi khwabon mein milein to shayad khuwab bhi na rahein? Girl standing ovation 🤧💌
Oh Momina, I love how you mix Punjabi, Urdu and Sufi verse’s creating such a powerful impact. This surely describes the loop of a women’s life. It is devastatingly brilliant, unraveling the exhaustion, endurance and finally farewell- all at once.
and i thought i was talented for my age??? I genuinely have never read something more beautiful on this app, and I hope that record doesn’t get broken anytime soon. like seriously this is very beautiful I’m really glad I read this and I’m really glad you wrote it you are very spectacular
absolutely BEAUTIFUL woah woah woah I'm shook as always i love how you weave in different fragments of text in such a fluid manner. the image you created i could see the whole scene just wow mashaAllah so amazing to see such talent
This is my sign to go finish reading Alif 🫡 because ohmygod the cuts from the lyrics to your scene-setting were MASTERFUL and truly had me clinging to each word. will be coming back to read this piece whenever i get back to the book and drama
I regret not coming across this earlier, oh my god this is beyond beautiful. I love how this etched my heart the right way. Absolutely love the way you write, momina. Always looking upto you<3
u're the sweetest ilysm
The build up? The imagery? The perfect shayari for each moment? The shift from kabhi khwabon mein milein to shayad khuwab bhi na rahein? Girl standing ovation 🤧💌
THANKYOUU
gorgeous just gorgeous.
i love you bb u're the sweetest
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IT’S AB TIME WE STOP !! 🤍🤍🤍❤️🩹
Oh my... this pulled my hearts strings 😭
im so glad to hear that u like it omg
I don't like it, I loved it, this just sounds too good, how you have turned an idea into this play, how it flowed, it was an amazing read ♥️
Oh Momina, I love how you mix Punjabi, Urdu and Sufi verse’s creating such a powerful impact. This surely describes the loop of a women’s life. It is devastatingly brilliant, unraveling the exhaustion, endurance and finally farewell- all at once.
i love this comment sm. u paying so much attention to all the intricate details means so much to me u have no idea. jazakAllah ma'am
Flawlessly written
Rolao ge Kiya
instant sub omg this is actually so amazing!! you are incredibly talented and this was beautifully written
THANKYOU ure so kind aw
So breathtakingly beautiful 🥹
ugh momina quoting all my fav poetry and songs, my heart can’t handle it 😭
also on an side note: alif is a beautiful drama that everyone must watch at least once in their life.
THANKYOU AND yes. absolutely
and i thought i was talented for my age??? I genuinely have never read something more beautiful on this app, and I hope that record doesn’t get broken anytime soon. like seriously this is very beautiful I’m really glad I read this and I’m really glad you wrote it you are very spectacular
that's so sweet please ill cry. ure too kind jazakAllah :((
You are a dreamer, with a tender, beautiful heart. Allah Kareem bless you.
Shine on.
thats so kind of u aw, thankyou sm jazakAllah
absolutely BEAUTIFUL woah woah woah I'm shook as always i love how you weave in different fragments of text in such a fluid manner. the image you created i could see the whole scene just wow mashaAllah so amazing to see such talent
thankyou ure the kindest :(
Beautiful work as always
This is my sign to go finish reading Alif 🫡 because ohmygod the cuts from the lyrics to your scene-setting were MASTERFUL and truly had me clinging to each word. will be coming back to read this piece whenever i get back to the book and drama
thankyouu and i hope u can get to giving alif the time it deserves soon <3